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My CL ad for a new roommate - Journal of Omnifarious

May. 18th, 2007

08:55 pm - My CL ad for a new roommate

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So, here's the ad. Is there anything obvious wrong with it? Is there anything subtle wrong with it?

Thanks. :-)

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From:memegarden
Date:May 19th, 2007 05:21 am (UTC)
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We are looking for someone who wants to move the large bedroom upstairs

Well, I expect you want an "into" there.
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From:omnifarious
Date:May 19th, 2007 06:06 am (UTC)
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Oooh, good catch. :-)

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From:rosencrantz319
Date:May 19th, 2007 11:21 am (UTC)
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From:omnifarious
Date:May 19th, 2007 01:50 pm (UTC)
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Zow is. Clary and I got him and Clary just sort of left him with me. :-/

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From:butterflydrming
Date:May 19th, 2007 06:22 pm (UTC)
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Very good ad subject line. The ad is accurate, appealing, and has the needed info, IMO. Best of luck. Don't forget to re-list it again after a few days, so that it stays near the top, if you don't have anyone yet (and according to the craigslist rules, of course, whatever those are).

Have you posted in any other places, especially not-online? There may be someone who currently has very limited internet access who would see a print ad.
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From:sparklewench
Date:May 19th, 2007 11:50 pm (UTC)
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looks good. I have been on craigslist a lot lately, mostly reading housing wanted. good luck in your search.
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From:procyon112
Date:May 21st, 2007 11:12 pm (UTC)
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From:omnifarious
Date:May 22nd, 2007 02:02 pm (UTC)
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*grin* That would be an amusing ad for a roommate.

A room that mysteriously always has all the stuff arranged just the way it was last time you were in it despite that fact that 5 people share it?

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